Is graffiti art? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course, the graffti is art. This is because I think art is thinking about metaphysical problem by making something like painting, book and artwork. Why do you think that graffiti is not art. Seriously, I can\'t understand people who think that art is something special. If you write bad jokes on the wall and give them meaning, It will become the artwork. When you are taking a picture of someone or something, you are certainly performing art. I know that my opnion is not very convincing. They can understand what I say but they wouldn\'t empathize with my argument. However, I believe it is the truth that art is not something tremendous. We could be an artist at any time if we are thinking about important questions. Think constantly and do not obey the system.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kevin!
I get your opinion. But continue checking your spelling and punctuation marks when writing. You can also give some examples to expound on what you mean for better understanding. ^^
~T. Maine
>>Of course, graffiti is art.
This is because I think art is thinking about metaphysical problem by making something like painting, book and artwork.
>>This is because in my opinion art is something expressed metaphysically through painting, books, and artworks.
Why do you think that graffiti is not art.
>>Why do you think that graffiti is not art?
Seriously, I can\'t understand people who think that art is something special.
>>Correct.
If you write bad jokes on the wall and give them meaning, It will become the artwork.
>>If you write jokes on the wall and give them meaning, it is also considered artwork.
When you are taking a picture of someone or something, you are certainly performing art.
>>Correct.
I know that my opnion is not very convincing.
>>I know that my opinion is not very convincing.
They can understand what I say but they wouldn\'t empathize with my argument.
>>They can understand my point of view, but they wouldn\'t empathize with my argument.
However, I believe it is the truth that art is not something tremendous.
>>However, I believe the truth that art is not something tremendous.
We could be an artist at any time if we are thinking about important questions.
>>We could be considered an artist any time if we have reasons for doing some artwork.
Think constantly and do not obey the system.
>>Think constantly and follow what you believe in.
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