Is having a girl friend not good for studies ?

2010-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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My parents always told me that "Don't make a girl friend when you are young" I didn't really know what the "young" exactly mean. I was 15 years old that time and was I young? Anyhow it looks like they just thought, love is not good for studies because If I have a girl friend, I couldn't concentrate on doing my studies. However I often see someone who scored very highly on exam but has a other sex friend.. Especially girls do. It seems that It's almost boys who prepare for the date and It's almost girls who just get out and meet her boyfriend when being called. Love and studying.. I think I can do both well If I meet someone who has a very similar background and taste as me.

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Hi there [이름]! I’m so much impressed of your composition today. You know, we believe the same thing. We can do it simultaneously but it depends now on how the person handles both. Some people give more time for their love lives than in their studies so they fail to succeed in that field. Yet some, give more effort in studies than in their relationships so I guess, balance is really needed.  You have to learn how to manage your time, not only with your girlfriend nor with your studies but your family as well. Anyway, if you are asked to choose between the two, I guess you’re mature enough to know your priority in life. More than that, I believe that you can handle everything when you think first before doing something. Over all, you did a great job! Just be careful of the word choices and punctuation marks. Have a great time and see you tomorrow! Keep safe! ^_^ T. ABBY Is having a girl friend not good for studies ? >> correct >> Is Having a Girlfriend Not Good for Studies? (Make sure that the first letter of the words in your title is capitalized) My parents always told me that "Don't make a girl friend when you are young" >> My parents used to tell me this,  “Don’t court or have a girlfriend when you are young.” >> My parents used to say this, “Don’t court/ have a girlfriend at an early age.” >> My parents used to tell me not to have girlfriends yet while I am young.I didn't really know what the "young" exactly mean. >>I didn’t really know what the word “YOUNG” exactly means. I was 15 years old that time and was I young? >> correct >> I was 15 years old that time and was I young. (be very careful with your punctuation mark) Anyhow it looks like they just thought, love is not good for studies because If I have a girl friend, I couldn't concentrate on doing my studies. >> Anyhow, it looks like they just thought that love is not good for studies because it won’t help me in concentrating with my lessons. >> Anyhow, I guess they just thought of that because they believe that if I get a girlfriend, I couldn’t concentrate with my studies anymore.However I often see someone who scored very highly on exam but has a other sex friend.. Especially girls do. >> However, I often see some students who get very high scores/good scores on their exams while having relationship with the opposite sex. It seems that It's almost boys who prepare for the date and It's almost girls who just get out and meet her boyfriend when being called. >>It seems that most boys prepare for a date while girls just get out to meet their boyfriends when called by them.Love and studying.. I think I can do both well If I meet someone who has a very similar background and taste as me. >> Love and studies, I think I can do both simultaneously especially when I meet someone who has the same belief as me. >> I think I can do both love and studies simultaneously, especially when I meet someone who has the same point of view.

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