Is homework good or bad for student achievement?

2019-09-18 · 첨삭 강사 Sandy

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I think it depends. A homework is sometimes very helpful for students, but it is sometimes not good for them. For example, there are two student, Amy and Joseph. Amy wants to be a math teacher, and Joseph hopes to be a soccer player. One day, their teacher gave them a homework to solve many hard math problems. In this case, this homework will be beneficial to Amy, but it is the waste of time to Joseph. Amy will do the best for her homework, and her math solving skills will be improved. However, Joseph just wants to play soccer rather than solving math problems. Then, he will do his homework very roughly, and he will play soccer. For him, this homework makes waste his time. Likewise, I think that a homework is not necessarily helpful for every student.

강사 첨삭

Hello Chloe! Thank you for answering the essay question. Continue doing a good job in our classes. Have a great day!

-Teacher Sandy-

I think it depends.

>> Correct.

A homework is sometimes very helpful for students, but it is sometimes not good for them. 

>> Homework is sometimes very helpful for students, but it is sometimes not good for them. 
For example, there are two student, Amy and Joseph.

>> For example there are two students, Amy and Joseph.
 Amy wants to be a math teacher, and Joseph hopes to be a soccer player.

>> Correct.
One day, their teacher gave them a homework to solve many hard math problems.

>> One day, their teacher gave them homework to solve many hard math problems.
 In this case, this homework will be beneficial to Amy, but it is the waste of time to Joseph.

>> Correct.
 Amy will do the best for her homework, and her math solving skills will be improved.

>> Correct.
 However, Joseph just wants to play soccer rather than solving math problems.

>> Correct.
 Then, he will do his homework very roughly, and he will play soccer.

 >> Then, he will do his homework very roughly, and he will play soccer instead.
 For him, this homework makes waste his time.

>> For him, this homework is a waste of time.
 Likewise, I think that a homework is not necessarily helpful for every student.

>> Likewise, I think that homework is not necessary and helpful for every student.


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