Is identity something people are born with or given, or is it something people create for themselves

2015-10-15 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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I think that personality is created by themselves. Yes, people have their natural personality such as sensitive or active. However if someone had a great shocked, their personalty suddenly changed. Even sometimes after teenage their personality was suddenly changed. For example, I naturally have very sensitive but very active personality. However just right after I entered middle school my personality has completely changed to introverted. There wasn't any trauma or accidents, it just suddenly changed. So I believe people can change their own personality. Especially if they desperately want to change their personality, no matter how much hard to do that, they can change it.

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Hello, [이름]! How are  you doing? I hope you\'re feeling better. Personality is what makes a person a unique individual. According to my readings, a person\'s personality has three primary components. These components are: temperament, environment and character. Temperament is a set of genetically determined traits that determines how a person\'s approach to the world and how he learns about the world. There are no genes that specify personality traits, but some genes control the development of a person\'s brain, which in turn controls behavior. Environment on the other hand is everything that is found around an individual and how he/she reacts to it. Finally, character is the set of emotional, behavioral and thinking patterns that a person has learned from his/her experiences. All of these affect a person\'s identity, personality and behavior. Our personalities are innate but it could change from time to time depending on our environment or our experiences. Have a great day [이름]! See you again tomorrow. Take care always. ~Teacher Charry (^_^) I think that personality is created by themselves. >> I think personality is created and not inherited.Yes, people have their natural personality such as sensitive or active. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: I agree that people have an innate personality. However if someone had a great shocked, their personalty suddenly changed. >> However, when someone experiences a traumatic incident, his/her personalty could suddenly change. Even sometimes after teenage their personality was suddenly changed. >> At times, after teenage years, a person\'s personality can suddenly change. For example, I naturally have very sensitive but very active personality. >> For example, when I was younger, I used to have a very sensitive but very active personality. However just right after I entered middle school my personality has completely changed to introverted. >> However, just right after I entered middle school, my personality completely changed and I became an introvert. There wasn\'t any trauma or accidents, it just suddenly changed. >> CORRECT! OR >> I did not experience any trauma or accidents. My personality just suddenly changed. So I believe people can change their own personality. >> So I believe people can change their own personalities. OR >> That\'s why I believe that people have the ability to change their own personalities. Especially if they desperately want to change their personality, no matter how much hard to do that, they can change it. >> Especially if they desperately want to change their personality, no matter how hard it is to do that, they can change it.

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