Is it a good idea for students to take a \"gap year\" to travel , work or volunteer before going to
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Thank you for writing an essay for this question. ^_^
I think a gap year is only a good idea when you\'re really exhausted and rich. kkk.
If you\'re not, a gap year would only be a waste of time and resources.
I believe in using your time wisely because time is a very valuable commodity. :)
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great night.
See you tomorrow in class. ^^
~Teacher Charry :)
I think \"gap year\" is good idea for students before going college.
>> I think a \"gap year\" is a good idea for students before going to college.
I think going to a good college is better than taking a \"gap year.\"
>> CORRECT!
I don\'t think it\'s too late to think about future job after entering college.
>> I don\'t think it\'s too late to think about one\'s future job after entering college.
Also, I think it would be good to study and work together for 3 or 4 years of college.
>> Also, I think it would be good to study and work at the same time for 3 or 4 years while in college.
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