Is it acceptable for parents to use physical force to discipline their children?
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Using the physical force for controlling the children is not that reasonable and effective.
>>Using physical force in controlling children isn\'t reasonable and ineffective.
It is only effective for the short time.
>>It is only effective for a short time.
Children try to avoid the situation in which their parents are puni[이름]g them physically.
>>Children try to avoid this kind of situation in which parents are pu[이름]g them physically.
Unfortunately, the lesson that they are given does not last longer.
>>Unfortunately, the lesson they have learned won\'t last long.
Instead of the physical force, parents have to use logical and rational explanations including the appropriate examples or experiences in order to give them a long-lasting instruction.
>>Instead of physical force, parents have to use logical and rational explanations including appropriate examples or experiences in order to give them a long-lasting instructions.
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