Is it always best to determine one's own views of right and wrong, or can we benefit from following

2015-10-07 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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It is not always best to determine one's own views of right and wrong or to follow the crowd. There are advantages and disadvantages. When I decide by my self, in the case of things gonna good way, I'll so happy. However If the result is not good, I won't blame me. In the case of following others opinion, things are not so much different. However something is not going well I'll look for blame but then realise there is no-one to blame. That also not happy. So I think before following other person's opinion, look at the situation thoroughly and try to find a real way.

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Hi, [이름]! (^^,) Thank you very much for this composition. Before I share my thoughts about this matter, I would like to share a beautiful quote: \"Do not follow where the path may lead. Go instead where there is no path and leave a trail.\" Following the crowd is not always good. When you follow the crowd, you are depriving your self from deciding for what\'s best for you. You are restraining your self from learning how to think, thrive and succeed on your own. Just because everyone is going in one direction doesn\'t mean you should too. They could be wrong. Do not let other people dim your light. Think of your self as a star. To be a star, you must shine your own light and follow your own path. Don\'t worry about the darkness because that\'s when the star shines brightest. I hope you got inspired to forge your own path. Have a great day [이름]. I\'ll see you again tomorrow! ~Teacher Charry (^^.) \"Your time is limited, so don\'t waste it living someone else\'s life. Don\'t be trapped by dogma--which is living with the results of other people\'s thinking. Don\'t let the noise of other\'s opinions drown out your own inner voice. And most importantly, have the courage to follow your heart and intuition. They somehow already know what you truly want to become. Everything else is secondary.\" ~Steve Jobs It is not always best to determine one\'s own views of right and wrong or to follow the crowd. >> CORRECT! OR >> It\'s not always right to follow your own views of right and wrong or to follow the crowd. There are advantages and disadvantages. >>  CORRECT! OR >> Each aspect has its own advantages and disadvantages. When I decide by my self, in the case of things gonna good way, I\'ll so happy. >> When I decide on my own and the resulst are good, I am happy. However If the result is not good, I won\'t blame me. >> However, if the result is not good, then there\'s nobody else to blame but myself. In the case of following others opinion, things are not so much different. >> In the case of following others\' opinions, things are not so much different. However something is not going well I\'ll look for blame but then realise there is no-one to blame. >> When things are not going well, I will have the tendency to look for someone to blame only to realize that there\'s no one to blame. That also not happy. >> It\'s not a happy situation. So I think before following other person\'s opinion, look at the situation thoroughly and try to find a real way. >> I think before following other people\'s opinion, I have to thoroughly look at the situation and weigh things.

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