Is it always necessary for a married couple to have kids?
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I agree that having a kid is not a requirement in having a family.
Married couples can still live happily without kids and it is all up to them if they would have kids or not.
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Even though married couple don\'t’ need to have kids.
>> Even though they are a married couple, they don\'t need to have kids.
Having a kid or not is not a essential condition to make a family.
>> CORRECT!
Both having a child and not having a child are all depend on married couple.
>> Having a child and not having a child both depend on the married couple.
There are many good or bad things.
>> There are many good or bad things about having kids.
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