Is it best to have low expectations and to set goals we are sure of achieving?
학생이 쓴 원문
I agree that it is best to have low expectations and to set goals we are sure of achieving.
If we set a easy goal, we can easily achieve our goal and able to set a new goal. By continuing this, we can experience success. It make us to get a high self confidence and it leads more achievements.
Otherwise, if we set a difficult goal we might feel depressed. I partially understand that to set a difficult goal give us high motivation. However As the result of continuous depression, even we are afraid of setting a easy goal.
Moreover If we have a low expectations, when we achieve our goal, it make us more happier then we are highly expected. Even if we can't achieve our goal, as we have low expectations, so we are not so much depressed.
There are the reasons why I agree that it is best to have low expectations and to set goals we are sure of achieving.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
A great Wednesday to you. ^^
How\'s your day going so far?
Setting an easy goal has its advantages and disadvantages. Same is true in setting difficult goals.
You are right when you said setting an easy goal gives you satisfaction because it\'s very achievable.
There\'s also a lesser chance of getting frustrated and depressed because the chances of failing is very low.
However, it\'s also difficult to grow as a person in this kind of circumstances because you are already used to what\'s easy.
You get comfortable and become reluctant to challenge your abilities.
On the other hand, setting difficult goals is good because it allows you to envision yourself of achieving great things.
It makes you work and strive harder. However, when you set a difficult goal, you have to make sure that the goal is still realistic and achievable.
I think the reason why people get frustrated and depressed when they don\'t achieve their goals is because the goals they have set are too unrealistic to achieve.
In my opinion, a person should set both easy and difficult goals.
The easy goals that you make should be a stepping stone for you to achieve the difficult or bigger goals. It\'s just like trying to reach the top of the staircase. Before you reach the top, you have to take the steps one at a time. Do your best but expect less. When you do this, disappointments will less likely to occur.
I hope you are having a wonderful day [이름].
See you again tomorrow. ^^
Take care and God bless.
~Teacher Charry (^^,)
I agree that it is best to have low expectations and to set goals we are sure of achieving.
>> I agree that it is best to have low expectations and set goals that we are sure of achieving. If we set a easy goal, we can easily achieve our goal and able to set a new goal.
>> If we set an easy goal, we can easily achieve that goal and be able to set a new goal.
OR >> If we set an easy goal, it is easier for us to achieve that goal and be able to set a new goal.
By continuing this, we can experience success. >> By continuously doing this, we can achieve success.
It make us to get a high self confidence and it leads more achievements.
>> It enables us to attain a higher form of self confidence and leads us to more achievements.Otherwise, if we set a difficult goal we might feel depressed.
>> On the other hand, if we set difficult goals and are unable to achieve it, we might get depressed.
I partially understand that to set a difficult goal give us high motivation.
>> I understand that setting a difficult goal motivates us more.
However As the result of continuous depression, even we are afraid of setting a easy goal.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: However, as a result of getting depressed and frustrated, we might also get afraid of setting even the easiest goals.
Moreover If we have a low expectations, when we achieve our goal, it make us more happier then we are highly expected.
>> Moreover, when we have lesser expectations, we experience more happiness the moment we achieve our goals.
Even if we can\'t achieve our goal, as we have low expectations, so we are not so much depressed.
>> Even if we can\'t achieve our goal, because we have low expectations, we do not get depressed that much.
There are the reasons why I agree that it is best to have low expectations and to set goals we are sure of achieving.
>> These are the reasons why I think it is best to have low expectations and set goals that we are sure of achieving.
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