Is it better not to tell the truth?
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A spectacular Friday to you Sir [이름]!
First of all, I would like to thank you for continuously enrolling here at Power English and for being my student. And also for sending this in. I do agree with you. There are instances that we should tell a lie but we are aware that it is not good.
It all depends on the situation. I think this topic is also great for us to talk about in class. In order for you to express your ideas more.
A wonderful essay. Keep on writing and please go over the corrections below. If you have any questions, feel free to ask it in class. See you!
Teacher Nina
As we grew up, we learned that we must be honest.
>> Correct!
However, in the real world, sometimes it’s better not to tell the truth.
>> Correct!
There are cases that you should keep them secret until the last moment when you die.
>> There are cases that you should keep a secret until the last moment of your life.
>> OR: There are cases that you should keep a secret until you die.
It is for others even though you might have a hard time to keep it to yourself for a long time.
>> Did you mean: Others do it even though they are having a hard time to keep it to themselves for a long time.
>> OR: Some people do it even though they are having a hard time to keep it to themselves for a long time.
One of the istances is that your farther was a brutal murderer and abandoned you when you were a kid.
>> Correct! ( spelling check: instances ^^ )
He has never regretted his behavior, neither asked for forgiveness from the family of the victim and died in the jail. >> He never regretted his behavior, neither asked for forgiveness from the family of the victim and died in jail.
Would it be beneficial for his son to be told all the detailed stories about his farther?
>> Would it be beneficial for his son to be told all the detailed stories about his father?
I don’t think so.
>> Correct!
If his son had a good memory about his farther, just let it be like that.
>> Correct!
Do not give him a pain.
>> Do not give him pain.
If he knew the truth, he would suffer from it for the rest of his life.
>> Correct!
These are no valid reasons to tell him the truth.
>> Correct!
There is no absolute evil or absolute good.
>> Correct!
Likewise, there is no absolute truth.
>> Correct!
Even sometimes lying is necessary.
>> Even lying is sometimes necessary.
It all depends on the situation.
>> Correct!
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