Is it better to adjust a goal when it’s too hard or keep trying no matter what?
학생이 쓴 원문
I believe that adjusting a goal to get a achievement is good.
It\'s called small success.
Some hard tasks is hard to take a goal just once.
So, step by step is needed to get a hard goal.
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~~Teacher Ryka^^
I believe that adjusting a goal to get a achievement is good.
>> I believe that adjusting a goal to achieve success is good.
It\'s called small success.
>> This is called small success.
Some hard tasks is hard to take a goal just once.
>> Some difficult tasks are hard to achieve with just one goal.
So, step by step is needed to get a hard goal.
>> So, taking things step by step is needed to reach a difficult goal.
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