Is it better to be physically attractive or intelligent?
학생이 쓴 원문
Is it better to be physically attractive or intelligent?
Of course it is,
I think physical attractiveness is the most important in life.
Also, being intelligent means you can earn money a lot.
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>>Of course, it is.
I think physical attractiveness is the most important in life.
>>CORRECT
Also, being intelligent means you can earn money a lot.
Also, being intelligent means you can earn money a lot.
>>Also, being intelligent means you can earn a lot of money.
OR>>But, being intelligent means you can earn a lot of money.
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