Is it better to be physically attractive or intelligent?

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Here are my corrections for you:

I would say that being physically attractive or intelligent is beneficial than better. 

>> I would say that being physically attractive or intelligent is more beneficial than being better. 

If your appearance looks attractive, people tend to get to know you more. 

>> If you have an attractive appearance, people tend to want to get to know you more. 

That helps you to have diverse opportunities and experience which would enrich your life. 

>> That helps you to have diverse opportunities and experiences which would enrich your life. 

If you are intelligent, you also have many options to widen your world. 

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OR

>> If you are intelligent, you have a number of options to choose from for you to broaden your world. 

I assume those are the main reasons why people go to the plastic surgery and go on a harsh diet for their appearance and endless study for becoming smarter while spending tons of money. 

>> I assume those are the main reasons why people undergo plastic surgery and go on a harsh diet for their appearance to improve, and endless studying to become smarter while spending tons of money. 

Seeing as how the people are enthusiastically stimulated by beauty and fashion, you can easily imagine the power of being physically attractive. 

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Also consistent growth of online academic class shows not only student but also adult are interested in taking a class to be more intelligent.

>> Also, consistent growth of online academic classes shows not only students, but also adults, are interested in taking a class to be more intelligent.
I think this phenomenon describes Korean\'s character well. 

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That\'s why K-beauty & K-Style\'s are popular and many international companies choose Korean market as a trial run to see the reliable reaction.

>> That\'s why K-beauty & K-Styles are popular and many international companies choose Korean markets as their trial run to obtain a reliable reaction.