Is it better to go to popular tourist destinations or lesser-known tourist destinations? Why?
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In my opinion, I like to go to the both destinations during traveling. Whenever I travel other contries, I try to visit at least one popular tourist destination. Because the popular places for tourist mostly have their own vibes and it is worth to visit there. But, I don\'t like crowded places at the same time and most popoular toursit destinations are very crowded.  So I don\'t visit many tourist attractions. I think it is enough for me to visit one or two popular placese during traveling.
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In my opinion, I like to go to the both destinations during traveling.
>> In my opinion, I like to go to two destinations during traveling.
Whenever I travel other contries, I try to visit at least one popular tourist destination.
>> Whenever I travel to other countries, I try to visit at least one popular tourist destination.
Because the popular places for tourist mostly have their own vibes and it is worth to visit there.
>> CORRECT!
But, I don\'t like crowded places at the same time and most popoular toursit destinations are very crowded. 
>> But, I don\'t like crowded places at the same time and most popular tourist destinations are very crowded.
So I don\'t visit many tourist attractions.
>> CORRECT!
I think it is enough for me to visit one or two popular placese during traveling.
>> I think it is enough for me to visit one or two popular places during traveling.
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