Is it better to grow up in the city or in the countryside? Why do you think so?
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course, it\'s much better to grow up in the city than in the countryside. It\'s because there are a lot of infrastructure like the education, hospital, and entertainment. So, if I have my children, I will take them to grow up in the city. It\'s more safe. However, I want to live in the countryside after I retire. A nature thing will make me more comfortable.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Of course, it\'s much better to grow up in the city than in the countryside.
>> CORRECT!
It\'s because there are a lot of infrastructures like the education, hospital, and entertainment.
>> CORRECT!So, if I have my children, I will take them to grow up in the city.
>> CORRECT!It\'s more safe.
>> It\'s safer for them.
However, I want to live in the countryside after I retire.
>> CORRECT!
A nature thing will make me more comfortable.
>> CORRECT!
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