Is it better to have few friends or many friends?
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The more the better, I think. However, in my case, I have a few friends left nowadays. According that we’re getting older, I think that it is not easy to keep our relationship.
Most of them got married and so the time we could meet has been reduced. Excluding me, they are focusing on their baby, husband, etc.. But, I think that it is a natural thing.
If we have a lot of friends, we might not be lonely and our physical and mental condition could be improved. According to a new report, those who live alone may a high death rate than someone who doesn’t.
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Hi there, Miss [이름]!
Oh my god TT You made me scared.
You know that I live alone~ TT
The more the better, I think.
>>CORRECT!
However, in my case, I have a few friends left nowadays.
>>CORRECT!
According that we’re getting older, I think that it is not easy to keep our relationship.
>>As we get older, I think that it is not easy to keep our relationship.Most of them got married and so the time we could meet has been reduced.
>>CORRECT!
Excluding me, they are focusing on their baby, husband, etc.. But, I think that it is a natural thing.
>>Excluding me, they are focusing on their baby, husband, etc.. but, I think that it is a natural thing.If we have a lot of friends, we might not be lonely and our physical and mental condition could be improved.
>>CORRECT!
According to a new report, those who live alone may a high death rate than someone who doesn’t.
>>CORRECT!
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