Is it better to have frequent small gatherings or rare big reunions?
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I think it\'s better to have small family gatherings frequently rather than big reunions.
>> I think it\'s better to have small family gatherings frequently rather than rare big reunions.
Because It takes too much time to go for big reunions.
>> Because it takes too much time to attend big reunions.
And I do like unusual things like drinking and watching TV all day during it.
>> And I don’t like doing unusual things, such as drinking and watching TV all day during them.
But I can stick my routine even though I have small family gatherings.
>> But I can stick to my routine even when I have small family gatherings.
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