Is it better to invest in public transport or roads for private cars?

Hi there! You did a great job expressing your opinion about public transport versus roads. I like how you connected your ideas to environmental concerns and convenience for commuters. Your reasoning about why people choose private cars, because stations are far from their destination, was especially accurate. Just be careful with a few grammar points, like “investing in public transport is better than investing in roads for private cars,” and “car exhaust pollutes the environment.” Also, try to keep your sentences clear and focused so the main idea stands out. Overall, you explained your viewpoint well and showed good critical thinking. Nice work!

-Teacher Wela 

For environment, investing in public transport is better than road for private car.

>> For the environment, investing in public transport is better than investing in roads for private cars.

Because car gas pollute the environment.

>> This is because car emissions pollute the environment.

If government want to people use public transport, they need to make more and specific route.

>> If the government wants people to use public transport, they need to create more routes and make them more specific.

Because I think the reason people use private car is that public transport station is far from their desination, so they feel uncomfortable.

>> I think the reason people prefer private cars is that public transport stations are often far from their destinations, which makes them feel uncomfortable.

However, if there\'re not enough to invest too many route of public transport, they try to invest the road if private car.

>> However, if there isn’t enough budget to invest in many public transport routes, the government ends up investing more in roads for private cars instead.