Is it better to plan every detail of a trip or be spontaneous?

Hi Mary! You did a great job explaining your opinion about planning trips. I can see that you have a lot of real-life experience, and you expressed your ideas clearly and logically. I especially liked how you compared your strict planning style in your early twenties with your more relaxed approach now. Just keep an eye on some grammar points, like using plural nouns (“plans,” “places”) and choosing more natural expressions such as “a strict planner,” “daily plan,” or “anxiety about delays.” Also, remember to use past tense when talking about past experiences. Overall, your answer was thoughtful, well-organized, and easy to understand. Keep up the good work!

-Teacher Wela 

I think we need minimum plan.

>> I think we need a minimum plan.

In my experience, more detailed plan make more stress.

>> In my experience, more detailed plans create more stress.

If I planed traveling per hour, and the situation was delayed, then this make me frustrated.

>> If I planned my trip by the hour and something got delayed, it made me frustrated.

Actually, I was hard-planner at early-20.

>> Actually, I was a strict planner in my early twenties.

But, after lots of trip with various people, too much plan make worse relationship with trip partner.

>> But after many trips with different people, too much planning made my relationship with my travel partners worse.

Therefore, on thesedays, I include only 2-3 place in my plan on one-day and if I need, I make a reservation for dining.

>> Therefore, these days, I include only two or three places in my daily plan, and if needed, I make dining reservations.

With relaxed-schedule, we can enjoy our travel without argument or anxiety of delay.

>> With a more relaxed schedule, we can enjoy our trip without arguments or anxiety about delays.