Is it better to plan goals for the whole year or take things month by month? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it\'s better to take things month by month.
Because I think if I plan my goals throughout the year, I will set a big, abstract goal. However, if I take things month by month, I will be able to set more detailed and practical goals.
Also, it is related to my personality, and I\'m not good at practicing when I set abstract goals. However, I strongly feel that if I set samll and detailed goals, I can practice them, so I recommend setting monthly goals that allow you to set small and detailed goals.
강사 첨삭
Hi!
Thank you for submitting your answer. Great job with your sentences as well. ^^
I also totally agree that being able to set small and detailed goals is way better since they become easily more attainable. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
I think it\'s better to take things month by month.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I think it’s better to approach things month by month.
Because I think if I plan my goals throughout the year, I will set a big, abstract goal.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Planning yearly goals often leads me to create goals that are too abstract.
However, if I take things month by month, I will be able to set more detailed and practical goals.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Monthly planning helps me create more detailed goals.
Also, it is related to my personality, and I\'m not good at practicing when I set abstract goals.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: This relates to my personality because abstract goals are hard for me to follow.
However, I strongly feel that if I set samll and detailed goals, I can practice them, so I recommend setting monthly goals that allow you to set small and detailed goals.
>> However, I strongly feel that if I set small and detailed goals, I can follow through with them, so I recommend setting monthly goals that allow for small and specific targets.
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