Is it better to plan your trip or be spontaneous?
학생이 쓴 원문
It is better to find the balance of them.
We should definitely plan something we should do, such as booking a hotel, exchanging money and buying flight tickets.
It is necessary for finding several places we can visit around the hotel in advance.
Except above, I would like to prefer a spontaneous trip.
Someone might say it\'s better to search for nice restaurants in advance.
But I have experienced that some restaurants I found online were closed on that day I visited.
I also don\'t want to waste my time standing in a long line.
We might discover delicious restaurants that are unknown to foreign tourists purely by chance.
A trip become special because it takes us out of our daily routine.
In conclusion, we can enjoy our trip finding the balance of planning and spontaneity.
강사 첨삭
That’s a great point, [이름]!
I like how you mentioned both sides, planning for essentials and leaving room for unexpected discoveries. I also think spontaneity makes the trip more memorable because we get to explore without pressure.
- Kristine ^^
It is better to find the balance of them.
>> Correct.
Or >> It’s best to balance both.
We should definitely plan something we should do, such as booking a hotel, exchanging money and buying flight tickets.
We should definitely plan something we should do, such as booking a hotel, exchanging money and buying flight tickets.
>> We should definitely plan certain things, such as booking a hotel, exchanging money, and buying flight tickets.
It is necessary for finding several places we can visit around the hotel in advance.
It is necessary for finding several places we can visit around the hotel in advance.
>> It’s necessary to find several places to visit around the hotel in advance.
Except above, I would like to prefer a spontaneous trip.
Except above, I would like to prefer a spontaneous trip.
>> Aside from those things, I prefer to travel spontaneously.
Someone might say it\'s better to search for nice restaurants in advance.
>> Some people might say it’s better to look for nice restaurants in advance.
But I have experienced that some restaurants I found online were closed on that day I visited.
But I have experienced that some restaurants I found online were closed on that day I visited.
>> But I’ve experienced that some restaurants I found online were closed on the day I visited.
I also don\'t want to waste my time standing in a long line.
I also don\'t want to waste my time standing in a long line.
>> I also don’t want to waste my time waiting in a long line.
We might discover delicious restaurants that are unknown to foreign tourists purely by chance.
We might discover delicious restaurants that are unknown to foreign tourists purely by chance.
>> We might discover delicious restaurants unknown to foreign tourists purely by chance.
A trip become special because it takes us out of our daily routine.
A trip become special because it takes us out of our daily routine.
>> Traveling becomes special because it takes us out of our everyday routine.
In conclusion, we can enjoy our trip finding the balance of planning and spontaneity.
In conclusion, we can enjoy our trip finding the balance of planning and spontaneity.
>> In conclusion, we can enjoy our trip by finding a balance between planning and spontaneity.
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