Is it better to plan your weekend or be spontaneous?
학생이 쓴 원문
I prefer making a plan for weekends.
I always make \"TO DO LIST\" roughly during on weekdays.
If I don\'t, I may spend all the day watching YOUTUBE and never go out from my bed
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]! You clearly expressed your preference for planning your weekends, and your example was very relatable and honest. Mentioning your to-do list helped explain why planning works well for you, and the YouTube example added a nice, realistic touch. Your ideas are easy to understand and well organized. To improve further, focus on small grammar details like articles and natural expressions. Overall, this was a clear, practical, and engaging response, well done!
-Teacher Wela
I prefer making a plan for weekends.
>> I prefer making a plan for the weekend.
I always make \"TO DO LIST\" roughly during on weekdays.
>> I always make a to-do list roughly during the weekdays.
If I don\'t, I may spend all the day watching YOUTUBE and never go out from my bed
>> If I don’t, I may spend the whole day watching YouTube and never get out of bed.
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