Is it better to play a team sport or an individual sport? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
It is hard to win every games in the team sports even I might have incredible talents.
Because team sports has many variable.
That\'s why I like team sports more.
I like watching harmony of the team.
강사 첨삭
Hi! I’m delighted you dedicated time to completing the homework. You did a wonderful job expressing your experiences—keep up the great effort!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
It is hard to win every games in the team sports even I might have incredible talents.
>> It is hard to win every game in team sports even if I have incredible talent.
>> Because team sports have many variables.
That\'s why I like team sports more.
>> That’s why I like team sports more.
I like watching harmony of the team.
>> I like watching the harmony of the team.
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