Is it better to rent a home or buy a home? Give two reasons for your answer.

2021-01-21 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I prefer buy a home compared with rent a home. Because In that case I rent a home, Someday, I empty my house. because not in my house. But, If I buy home, not move to another house.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. [이름]tina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I prefer buy a home compared with rent a home. Because In that case I rent a home,

>> I prefer buying a home than renting a home because right now I\'m renting my home.

Someday, I empty my house. because not in my house.

>> Someday, I will move from my house because I don\'t own it.
But, If I buy home, not move to another house

>> But if I buy a home. I won\'t need to move to another house.



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