Is it better to rent a home or buy a home? Give two reasons for your answer.
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Here are my corrections for you:
I prefer buy a home compared with rent a home. Because In that case I rent a home,
>> I prefer buying a home than renting a home because right now I\'m renting my home.
Someday, I empty my house. because not in my house.
>> Someday, I will move from my house because I don\'t own it.
But, If I buy home, not move to another house
>> But if I buy a home. I won\'t need to move to another house.
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