Is it better to study english in class or online ? and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]
I like to study english in class. But it need more time and money. Online or telephone is free from time and place. So I like online better than offline.
I had a training about my business product by online.
It was very good time for me. I think it was same with offline situation. It was possible to talk with partcipants and lectures and it seem to be a vertual reality. It is very convenience tool for new training.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
I had a training about my business product by online.
It was very good time for me.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
I like to study english in class.
>> I like to study English in class.
But it need more time and money.
>> But it needs more time and money.
Online or telephone is free from time and place.
>> You can have an online or telephone class anytime and anywhere.
So I like online better than offline.
>> CORRECT!
I had a training about my business product by online.
>> I had training about my business product online.
It was very good time for me.
>> It was a very good time for me.
I think it was same with offline situation.
>> I think it was the same as the offline situation.
It was possible to talk with partcipants and lectures and it seem to be a vertual reality.
>> It was possible to talk with participants and the lectures seem to be virtually real.
It is very convenience tool for new training.
>> It is a very convenient tool for new training.
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