Is it common for people to protest in your country? What do they usually protest about?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it is common because my country is democratic state. We have freedom of expression and my country guarantee freedom of assembly.
If someone take legal procedure about assembly and don\'t the law during demonstration, it is not problem.
I think they usually protest to require their right about wage, working hours, and so on.
If they want to require to the government, they usually protest.
Through the protest, they can get the choice of negotiation.
So, I think it is positive factor to develop democracy.
강사 첨삭
Hello Se [이름]!
Here are the corrections.
I think it is common because my country is democratic state. We have freedom of expression and my country guarantee freedom of assembly.
>>I think it is common because my country is a democratic state. We have freedom of expression and my country guarantees freedom of assembly.
If someone take legal procedure about assembly and don\'t the law during demonstration, it is not problem. I think they usually protest to require their right about wage, working hours, and so on.
>>If someone takes legal procedure about assembly and doesn\'t impose the law during demonstration, it is not a problem. I think they usually protest to require their right about wage, working hours, and so on.
If they want to require to the government, they usually protest. Through the protest, they can get the choice of negotiation. So, I think it is positive factor to develop democracy.
>>If they want to require the government, they usually protest. Through the protest, they can get the choice of negotiation. So, I think it is a positive factor to develop democracy.
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