Is it easy or difficult to get rid of a bad habit? Why?

2022-08-18 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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In my opinion, getting rid of a bad habit is difficult to do. It is hard to get rid of a habit even though it is a good habit. For me, I always wake up and eat breakfast at the morning. But, if I try to change this habit, then it will be very hard to do. Because of this reason, it will be more harder to change our bad habits. It will take a long time and a lot of our efforts. But, I believe that if you give some efforts about your goals, then it will be succeeded someday.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! 
I agree with you. There is a saying that \"old habits die hard\". Keep up the good job! See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate 

In my opinion, getting rid of a bad habit is difficult to do.
>>CORRECT!
It is hard to get rid of a habit even though it is a good habit.
>>CORRECT!
For me, I always wake up and eat breakfast at the morning.
>>For me, I always wake up and eat breakfast in the morning.
But, if I try to change this habit, then it will be very hard to do.
>>CORRECT!
Because of this reason, it will be more harder to change our bad habits.
>>Because of this reason, it will be harder to change our bad habits.
It will take a long time and a lot of our efforts.
>>CORRECT!
But, I believe that if you give some efforts about your goals, then it will be succeeded someday.
>>But, I believe that if you exert some effort for your goals, then you will succeed someday.

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