Is it ever acceptable for someone to break the law to protect others?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it is acceptable. For example, when kids crossing the road and the car is coming because driver is sleeping, another driver on the opposite path can decide to drive over the middle line to protect kids. As a result, the driver breaks the law, but he protect a lot of lifes. And he might be hurted to defense the coming car. At that case, how can we punish the driver? Many people may have to thank him for his sacrifice and his decision at that time.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Mary! You gave a strong and thoughtful example to support your opinion, and your reasoning was clear and persuasive. I especially liked how you used a real-life situation to explain why breaking the law can sometimes be morally acceptable, which shows good critical thinking. To improve your writing, focus on using correct verb forms, adding articles (a, the), and choosing more natural expressions to make your sentences smoother. Overall, your ideas are mature and well developed, keep practicing, and your accuracy will continue to improve.
-Teacher Wela
For example, when kids crossing the road and the car is coming because driver is sleeping, another driver on the opposite path can decide to drive over the middle line to protect kids.
>> For example, when children are crossing the road and a car is approaching because the driver is asleep, another driver in the opposite lane may decide to cross the center line to protect the children.
As a result, the driver breaks the law, but he protect a lot of lifes.
>> As a result, the driver breaks the law, but he protects many lives.
And he might be hurted to defense the coming car.
>> He might also be injured while blocking the oncoming car.
At that case, how can we punish the driver?
>> In that case, how could we punish the driver?
Many people may have to thank him for his sacrifice and his decision at that time.
>> Many people would instead thank him for his sacrifice and quick decision.
Many people may have to thank him for his sacrifice and his decision at that time.
>> Many people would instead thank him for his sacrifice and quick decision.
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