Is it fine for you to travel to other countries using a boat? Why or why not?

2020-09-17 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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I always love travelling, especially, to go abroad.  I went to Jeju island from Incheon port and to Macau from Hong Kong using a ship, but I have never visited the other countries by boat. Going to Japan or China or eastern parts of Russia in this is possible taking about a day or a little more.  I don’t prefer this, because this is time consuming. Actually, we can go almost everywhere in the world within two days by a flight. I’m not sure, but using a ship is not much cheaper than using a plane. There are many low cost airways, nowadays. However, I sometimes dream about cruising the world embarking on a luxurious ferry.

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Thank you [이름]!
~Lucy

I always love travelling, especially, to go abroad.
>>I always love travelling, especially going abroad.
I went to Jeju island from Incheon port and to Macau from Hong Kong using a ship, but I have never visited the other countries by boat. 
>>CORRECT!
Going to Japan or China or eastern parts of Russia in this is possible taking about a day or a little more.
>>CORRECT!
I don’t prefer this, because this is time consuming. 
>>CORRECT!
Actually, we can go almost everywhere in the world within two days by a flight. 
>>CORRECT!
I’m not sure, but using a ship is not much cheaper than using a plane. 
>>CORRECT!
There are many low cost airways, nowadays.
>>CORRECT!
However, I sometimes dream about cruising the world embarking on a luxurious ferry.
>>CORRECT!

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