Is it good or bad to be a single child/only-child?
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I think it is good to have many children.
It is desirable for families to help and live with each other as part of society.
The loneliness of a single-child family is selfish.
As many people as possible, children should be good
In the old saying, one was lonely and two were missed.
I know that it is a world where people cannot live alone, and many families are good.
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It is desirable for families to help and live with each other as part of society.
It is desirable for families to help and live with each other as part of society.
>>CORRECT!
The loneliness of a single-child family is selfish.
The loneliness of a single-child family is selfish.
>>A family with a single child is lonely and selfish.
As many people as possible, children should be good
As many people as possible, children should be good
>>It should be good if many people will have children as much as possible.
In the old saying, one was lonely and two were missed.
In the old saying, one was lonely and two were missed.
>>The old saying goes \"one is lonely and two is not\". (I am not sure about this saying. )
I know that it is a world where people cannot live alone, and many families are good.
I know that it is a world where people cannot live alone, and many families are good.
>>I know that this world is where people cannot live alone and having many family members is good.
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