Is it good that people have too much enthusiasm?
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I think it is not good that people have too much enthusiasm.
>> CORRECT!
First, people can be exhausted easily.
>> CORRECT!
What I mean is that if people have too much enthusiasm, they will do their best for the first time.
>> CORRECT!
However, as time goes by, they are going to be tired and sick of it finally.
>> CORRECT!
They even can loose their health and give up what they have to do.
>> CORRECT!
Also, they can forget about their important goals.
>> CORRECT!
For example, when the rich started their own business, they were humble and diligent.
>> CORRECT!
They wanted to be rich but nice owners.
>> CORRECT!
However, prospering their business, they have enthusiasm more and more towarding money.
>> However, as their business prospers, their enthusiasm towards money grows.
Therefore, they are getting greedy and only focus on gainning money.
>> Therefore, they get greedy and only focus on gainning money.
They ofren ingore their employees and looo down on other people as well.
>> They often ignore their employees and look down on other people as well.
For these reasons,I think it is not good that people have too much enthusiasm.
>> For these reasons, I think it is not good that people have too much enthusiasm.
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