Is it humane to ban things and ban Chinese people from entering your country?
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Is it humane to ban things and ban Chinese people from entering your country?
In my opinion, it is not humane. However, personally, I do not want them to enter Korea. I think China has been being always harmful to Korea.
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Is it humane to ban things and ban Chinese people from entering your country?
In my opinion, it is not humane.
In my opinion, it is not humane.
>>> CORRECT
However, personally, I do not want them to enter Korea.
>>> CORRECT
I think China has been being always harmful to Korea.
>>> I think China has always been causing harm to Korea.
OR: I think China has been always harmful to Korea.
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