Is it important for you to get rich?

Before I write about the importance of getting rich, I should narrate the level of ‘rich’ that I think.

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I would like to say ‘He or she is rich’ when the person deserve material abundance and is able to solve easily his or her problems with money though the standard might be different, person by person.

>>I would like to say ‘He or she is rich’ when the person deserves material abundance and is able to solve his or her problems easily with money though the standard might be different, person by person.

>>I would like to say ‘He or she is rich’ when the person deserves material abundance and can solve easily his or her problems with money though the standard might be different, person by person.

In this view, I think to be rich is crucial for me.

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In modern society, a human being cannot live alone.

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From getting the basic necessities to being psychological satisfied, we have to communicate and trade with others, and we need methods that we can trust each other, and that is money.

>>From getting the basic necessities to being psychologically satisfied, we have to communicate and trade with others, and we need methods that we can trust each other, and that is money.

In other words, money is able to have mighty power only in a human community.

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>>In other words, money can have mighty power only in a human community.

Ironically, money would be the one of the most creative item that we can keep our social nature.

>>Ironically, money would be one of the most creative items that we can keep our social nature.

In conclude, it is important for me to get rich, as a community’s member who want to get more chances for better life and to overcome my or my family’s barriers.

>>In conclusion, it is important for me to get rich, as a community member who wants to get more chances for a better life and to overcome my or my family’s barriers.