Is it important to compare ourselves to others? Why or why not?
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Actually comparing to others is not important.
However, We are living in the competition world and also the comparing is instinct of a human.
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Actually comparing to others is not important.
>> Actually, I believe that comparing ourselves to others is not important at all.
However, We are living in the competition world and also the comparing is instinct of a human.
>> However, we are living in a world full of competition, and as human as we are, comparing is part of our nature.
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