Is it important to have a good childhood to be successful in life?
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I think it is important to have a good childhood to be successful in life because it can be the cornerstone to make people be independent when they are grown-up. when people have the memories of being supported, loved or success, they can move toward with pride, confidence and high self-esteem on their own. Therefore, I think past has STRONG power through the whole life.
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Is it important to have a good childhood to be successful in life?
I think it is important to have a good childhood to be successful in life because it can be the cornerstone to make people be independent when they are grown-up.
>> Having a good childhood is without a doubt a critical factor in a successful life because it can be the cornerstone to the development of independence when a person reaches adulthood.
when people have the memories of being supported, loved or success, they can move toward with pride, confidence and high self-esteem on their own.
>> When people have memories of being supported, loved, or successful, they can act with pride, confidence, and high self-esteem on their own.
Therefore, I think past has STRONG power through the whole life.
>> Therefore, I think a person\'s past has a strong influence and impact on his/her life.
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