Is it important to help other people? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, it is. It\'s because when I need some help, they can help me. So, If I can do that, I should help them. But there are some cases that I can\'t help them. In that case, it\'s better to ask for help from people around me. Like this, there are times when I also need someone else\'s help, so I think it\'s right to help what I can.
강사 첨삭
Hello Cindy!
It\'s nice to see your opinion about this topic. Be ready to give a hand to those who need it. See you in class! ^^
~T. Maine
>>Correct.
So, If I can do that, I should help them.
>>Correct.
But there are some cases that I can\'t help them.
>>Correct.
In that case, it\'s better to ask for help from people around me.
>>Correct.
Like this, there are times when I also need someone else\'s help, so I think it\'s right to help what I can.
>>For example this situation, there are times when I also need someone else\'s help. So I think it\'s just right to help when I can.
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