Is it important to know a lot of information in today\'s world? Why or Why not?
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Yes, it\'s important to know a lot of information but also I think it\'s no. I mean that It\'s not that important to know a lot of information. I think you have a lot of information but if you don\'t use that information what you know then that information is useless. If you know a lot of information, it will be great but you can\'t possibly know everything because world\'s information changes so fast and it\'s too much. If you are comfortable to live the amount of information you have then I think that\'s enough.
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Yes, it\'s important to know a lot of information but also I think it\'s no.
>>>Yes, it\'s important to know a lot of information, but sometimes I think not.
I mean that It\'s not that important to know a lot of information.
>>>I mean, it\'s not that important to know a lot of information.
I think you have a lot of information but if you don\'t use that information what you know then that information is useless.
>>>I think you have a lot of information, but if you don\'t use the information that you know then that information is useless.
If you know a lot of information, it will be great but you can\'t possibly know everything because world\'s information changes so fast and it\'s too much.
>>>If you know a lot of information, it will be great, but you can\'t possibly know everything because the world\'s information changes so fast and it\'s too much.
If you are comfortable to live the amount of information you have then I think that\'s enough.
>>>If you are comfortable to live with the amount of information you have, then I think that\'s enough.
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