Is it important to know a lot of information in today’s world? Why or why not?
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Is it important to know a lot of information in today’s world? Why or why not?
> Yes, I think knowing a lot of information is important in these days. Because the world is going to more complicated, so For example, when I saw the NEWS about politics, I can\'t understand perfectly without knowing some economic knowledge. Nowadays, there\'s no one thing(subjects, studies ...etc) alone but many things are intertwined by themselves.
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Good evening, Yasmin!^^
You did it! You expressed your thoughts through writing and this is a very good practice for your writing skills. Keep it up!^_^
Yes, I think knowing a lot of information is important in these days.
>>> Yes, I think knowing a lot of information is important these days.
Because the world is going to more complicated, so For example, when I saw the NEWS about politics, I can\'t understand perfectly without knowing some economic knowledge.
>>>It\'s because the world is going more complicated, for example, when I saw the news about politics, I couldn\'t understand it perfectly without knowing some economic knowledge.
Nowadays, there\'s no one thing(subjects, studies ...etc) alone but many things are intertwined by themselves.
>>>Nowadays, there\'s no things like subjects, studies, etc. alone, but many things are intertwined by themselves.
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