Is it important to study about the outer space?
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I think is important to be the dreamjob is Astornaut.
But it can be important for normal people too.
When I was young, I like space.
Maybe, that time, my favorite was space.
But this time is subway.
Because, subway is fast, funny sounds and colors.
These are the reasons why I think learning space is important.
And I was young, I like space, And at the present, I like subways.
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I think is important to be the dreamjob is Astornaut.
>> I think it is important if your dream job is to be an astronaut.
But, it can be important for normal people, too.
>> CORRECT!
When I was young, I like space.
When I was young, I like space.
>> When I was young, I used to like the space.
Maybe, that time, my favorite was space.
>> Maybe, that time, my favorite was the space.
But this time is subway.
>> But this time, I am more interested in subways.
Because, subway is fast, funny sounds and colors.
>> That\'s because subways are fast, colorful, and has funny sounds.
These are the reasons why I think learning space is important.
>> CORRECT!
And I was young, I like space, And at the present, I like subways.
>> When I was young, I used to like the outer space, but now, I like learning about subways.
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