Is it impossible to have a successful career and a happy family life?
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Theoretically it’s possible to have a successful career and a happy family life. However, in reality, we have witnessed many cases that a person who had good reputation for his/her successful career had so many family problems and actually failed in managing family affairs. It is true that it is not easy for one to be successful at work and highly regarded socially without devoting his time and energy more to his job than to his/her family. In order to be successful at work, you should stand out from strong rivals and colleagues by working twice than others. You might need to work on the weekends too. You need to go to the office whenever necessary. It means that you have to give a priority to work than your family. Your wife might understand you and be cooperative, however, your children won’t be so generous if they are still young. They prefer to have a father who spend his time with their children rather than devoting to work. We need to maintain a balance between work and life.
강사 첨삭
Happy Tuesday Sir [이름]. ^^ Thank you so much for your time.
I totally agree with you.
There are some people who are successful with their career but have family problems, vice versa.
I guess it depends on the person how you are going to make your marriage or family relationship work.
Let us be a positive thinker always especially when we deal with difficult situations.
See you in class.
Teacher Nina
Theoretically it’s possible to have a successful career and a happy family life.
>> correct
However, in reality, we have witnessed many cases that a person who had good reputation for his/her successful career had so many family problems and actually failed in managing family affairs.
>> correct
It is true that it is not easy for one to be successful at work and highly regarded socially without devoting his time and energy more to his job than to his/her family.
>> correct
In order to be successful at work, you should stand out from strong rivals and colleagues by working twice than others.
>> correct
You might need to work on the weekends too.
>> correct
You need to go to the office whenever necessary.
>> correct
It means that you have to give a priority to work than your family.
>> Better: It means that you have to give priority to work than your family.
Your wife might understand you and be cooperative, however, your children won’t be so generous if they are still young.
>> correct
They prefer to have a father who spend his time with their children rather than devoting to work.
>> correct
We need to maintain a balance between work and life.
>> correct
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