Is it Insomnia?

These days I couldn't sleep well... Every night I go to bed at 12 O'clock and try to sleep. When I lied on the bad I start to think about my work plan.. From there starts the problem.. about an hour to three hours I'm thingking, rolling my body..like that.. I pray to God (Oh! I'm a christian actually.) tomorrow everything will goes OK and make me not to cocern about my work too much!!

Hello  [이름],

It was fun reading your composition. I can see some corrections but over all you were doing great. Don’t worry to much about work. Just think of it as a goal and everything will be fine… Job well done with your correct sentences. Take care always and have a fun day.

 Always,

-Michelle-

 These days I couldn't sleep well...

>>Correct.

>>I couldn't sleep well this days.

Every night I go to bed at 12 O'clock and try to sleep.

>> Correct.

>>I go to bed at 12 midnight and try to sleep.

When I lied on the bad I start to think about my work plan..

>>When I lay on my bed, I start to think about my work plan.

From there starts the problem..

>>From there the problem starts..

 About an hour to three hours I'm thingking, rolling my body..

>>About one to three hours, I've been thinking, rolling around my body.

 Like that..

>>Just like that.

I pray to God (Oh! I'm a christian actually.) tomorrow everything will goes OK and make me not to cocern about my work too much!!

>>I always pray to god (Oh! By the way I am christian.) that tomorrow everything will be okay and to not make me worry about too much work.