Is it more fun to exercise alone or with other people?

2022-07-18 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi, Teacher~ I didn\'t go the waterpark on weekend. Bescause I had lunch with my a former junior on Saterday. I cleaned the bathroom and rested. HOMEWORK Is it more fun to exercise alone or with other people? I more fun to exercise alone. Due to I do not exercise well, so I can\'t follwer with other people. Thank you~~ Faith. have a nice day!

강사 첨삭

Wow! It\'s nice that you shared your activities last weekend, Soolyn! I am happy that you were able to take a rest. Also, you wrote your answer so quick. I love it! -Faith-
Hi, Teacher~
>> Hi, Teacher!~
I didn\'t go the waterpark on weekend. 
Bescause I had lunch with my a former junior on Saterday.
>> I did not go the waterpark last weekend because I had lunch with my former junior on Saturday.
I cleaned the bathroom and rested.
>> Then, I cleaned the bathroom and rested.
HOMEWORK
>> CORRECT
Is it more fun to exercise alone or with other people?
>> CORRECT
I more fun to exercise alone. Due to I do not exercise well, so I can\'t follwer with other people.
>> I think it\'s more fun to exercise alone because I cannot exercise well, so I cannot follow other people.
Thank you~~ Faith. 
>> Thank you, Faith. 
have a nice day!
>> Have a nice day!

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