Is it more important to do work that one finds fulfilling or work that pays well? Explain
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i think both important because ineed many money and fulfilling about work
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i think both important because ineed many money and fulfilling about work
>> I think both of them are important because having more money makes the work fulfilling.
>> OR: In my opinion, both of them are importat. If one earns a lot it will surely make the work fulfilling.
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