Is it more important to do work that one finds fulfilling or work that pays well? Explain.

2015-11-30 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Although it couldn’t be better for us to do work that makes us feel fulfilling, satisfied, rewarding, and pays well simultaneously, almost no one will have such a perfect and ideal job. In reality, we work under stress and deal with difficult tasks everyday: not only work itself but also other things like relationships with your boss and colleagues at work. If we have to choose between the two, I would do work that is meaningful and fulfilling than high paying jobs. I believe that most people would think the same way as I think. We can do work that pays a lot, but is very stressful, for a short period of time, however, we can hardly do the job for our life time. We’ll be burnt out easily and eventually find ourselves totally exhausted. However, we also cannot have the job that makes us feel pleased and fulfilling, but pays too low. It should pay a minimum amount of money so that we can make a living. Especially when we have a family to support, we can’t do the things only we like.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Sir [이름]!

Happy Monday!

How was your month?

I hope you had a marvelous one.
I can\'t wait to hear your stories in class.

Thanks for sending a perfect composition. ^^

All of the things you wrote below are right.

I can say that even though the job that we have pays low or high, we should be grateful for it.

Not all people have a job like us.

Thanks for making my day.
Teacher Nina


Although it couldn’t be better for us to do work that makes us feel fulfilling, satisfied, rewarding, and pays well simultaneously, almost no one will have such a perfect and ideal job.

>> Correct

In reality, we work under stress and deal with difficult tasks everyday: not only work itself but also other things like relationships with your boss and colleagues at work.

>> Correct

If we have to choose between the two, I would do work that is meaningful and fulfilling than high paying jobs.

>> Correct

I believe that most people would think the same way as I think.

>> Correct

We can do work that pays a lot, but is very stressful, for a short period of time, however, we can hardly do the job for our life time.

>> Correct

We’ll be burnt out easily and eventually find ourselves totally exhausted.

>> Correct

However, we also cannot have the job that makes us feel pleased and fulfilling, but pays too low.

>> Correct  

It should pay a minimum amount of money so that we can make a living.

>> Correct

Especially when we have a family to support, we can’t do the things only we like.

>> Correct

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