Is it more important to spend time with friends or focus on personal goals when schedules conflict?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the first consideration is prior appointment. After then, I think it depends on the relationship with friend and the situation. If very closed friends ask me make appointment in serious condition when I have another schedule but I can delay, then I consider to delay my original plan. However, if the friends are not closed to me and the situatiin also not serious, then I\'ll choose the original plan. Therefore, if I want to make appointment with my best friends, I ask them at least two month ago not to bother their schedule.
강사 첨삭
You gave a very practical and realistic answer by considering priorities, relationships, and different situations. I like how you explained clear conditions for when you would change your plans — this shows strong decision-making skills. To improve, focus on natural expressions like “close friend,” “make an appointment,” and correct time phrases like “two months in advance.” Overall, your reasoning is thoughtful, well-structured, and easy to follow!
-Teacher Wela
After then, I think it depends on the relationship with friend and the situation.
>> After that, I think it depends on my relationship with the friend and the situation.
If very closed friends ask me make appointment in serious condition when I have another schedule but I can delay, then I consider to delay my original plan.
>> If a very close friend asks to meet in a serious situation while I already have another plan, but I can reschedule it, then I would consider delaying my original plan.
However, if the friends are not closed to me and the situatiin also not serious, then I\'ll choose the original plan.
>> However, if the friend is not very close to me and the situation is not serious, then I will choose my original plan.
Therefore, if I want to make appointment with my best friends, I ask them at least two month ago not to bother their schedule.
>> Therefore, if I want to make an appointment with my best friends, I ask them at least two months in advance so that it does not interfere with their schedules.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.