Is it necessary to do further education after high school these days? What other options are there,
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Is it necessary to do further education after high school these days? What other options are there, besides education?
It is not necessary to do further education in university but 80% of Korean students enter university and it is trend. And they think they are outdated if they don\'t follow the trend.
I think if I am talented in something and need more development of it then entering university for further study is helpful.
But unless I am not the case, then I think i need motivation on what to do first.
And I think 2 things can give motivation.
Making one\'s own living or traveling
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It is not necessary to do further education in university but 80% of Korean students enter university and it is trend.
>> It is not necessary to do further education in university but 80% of Korean students enter university and it is a trend.
And they think they are outdated if they don\'t follow the trend.
>> CORRECT!
I think if I am talented in something and need more development of it then entering university for further study is helpful.
>> I think if I am talented in something and need to develop it more then entering a university for further study is helpful.
But unless I am not the case, then I think I need motivation on what to do first.
>> But unless I am not, in that case, then I think I need motivation on what to do first.
And I think 2 things can give motivation.
>> And I think two things can give me motivation.
Making one\'s own living or traveling.
>> CORRECT!
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