Is it necessary to learn self-defense?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t think it\'s necessary to learn now, but I think the need is increasing.
Because, It is not difficult to watch the news of sexual or motiveless crime at any time these days.
Women especially have to be cautious with it.
We should be able to defend ourselves if we do not get out of a dangerous situation.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sir [이름],
Because, It is not difficult to watch the news of sexual or motiveless crime at any time these days.
Women especially have to be cautious with it.
We should be able to defend ourselves if we do not get out of a dangerous situation.
The world nowadays became more dangerous.
Learning self-defense maybe unnecessary but we have to learn how to keep out of danger.
We rally can\'t determine someone\'s intention and capability.
Therefore, knowing your surroundings is a must.
Andrea
I don\'t think it\'s necessary to learn now, but I think the need is increasing.
>> Correct
Because, It is not difficult to watch the news of sexual or motiveless crime at any time these days.
>> These days, it already to watch news about sexual or motiveless crimes.
Women especially have to be cautious with it.
>> We have to be cautious about it especially women.
We should be able to defend ourselves if we do not get out of a dangerous situation.
>>> We should be able to defend ourselves if we can not get out of a dangerous situation.
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