Is it OK for men to cry?

Hello Christine!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I believe everyone has their own vulnerable moment. 

>> CORRECT!

OR

>> I believe everyone has their own moments where they are vulnerable.

When they face that tick, they have some of options to express their feelings by doing something for themselves to make them feel better. 

>> When they face that situation, they have options to express their feelings and do something for themselves to make them feel better. 

Crying is one of the way to kick out the bad mood. 

>> CORRECT!

I think it is a discrimination if someone think the men can not cry. 

>> I think it is a discrimination if someone thinks that men can not cry. 

Historically(;even until now), there has been certain authoritative rules between men and women. 

>> Historically, even until now, there has been certain authoritative rules between men and women. 

If you ask the question that \"Is it OK for men to cry?\", you are likely to accept the concept involuntarily. 

>> CORRECT!

I think crying is a very healthy way to stress out whether or not a gender.

>> I think crying is a very healthy way to de-stress regardless of gender.