Is it okay for people to stay for a long time inside a cafe?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think staying cafe is a right of customers. But, we should be considerate of the cafe owners. If we stay a long time without ordering something, cafe owners can\'t get more customers. So,we shouldn\'t stay a long time at cafe.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to take note of:
1. I think staying cafe is a right of customers.
>>I think staying in the cafe is the right of the customers.
2. But, we should be considerate of the cafe owners.
>>However, we should be considerate of the cafe owners.
3. If we stay a long time without ordering something, cafe owners can\'t get more customers.
>>CORRECT!
4. So, we shouldn\'t stay a long time at cafe.
>>So, we shouldn\'t stay for a long time at a cafe.
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