Is it okay to reprimand someone in front of others? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
Generally, it’s not a good idea to reprimand someone in front of others.
Public criticism can embarrass or humiliate the person, damaging their self-esteem.
It may cause anger, defensiveness, or resentment, rather than reflection and improvement.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jayjay!
2. Public criticism can embarrass or humiliate the person, damaging their self-esteem.
3. It may cause anger, defensiveness, or resentment, rather than reflection and improvement.
Thank you for your diligence in doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. Generally, it’s not a good idea to reprimand someone in front of others.
>>CORRECT!
2. Public criticism can embarrass or humiliate the person, damaging their self-esteem.
>>CORRECT!
OR>>Public criticism can embarrass or humiliate the person and damage their self-esteem.
3. It may cause anger, defensiveness, or resentment, rather than reflection and improvement.
>>CORRECT!
OR>>It may lead to anger, defensiveness, or resentment rather than reflection and improvement.
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